Monday, July 16, 2012

Hookers...

Today I am participating in the Hookers and Hangers Blogfest, hosted by the lovely ladies at Falling for Fiction. And, before I get to my hookers (smile), let me plug this wonderful blog. Among the many great posts they feature, each Thursday they offer a critique of a sample of writing. So, if you would like a pair of eyes on your writing, surf over to their site for more info on how to submit a sample.

This blogfest is 2 fold: today participants are supposed to post the first line from 3 or more chapters of their WIP, and Wednesday participants will post the last line from 3 or more chapters. These opening lines come from my current contemporary YA novel, Accidentally Me.


I have a stalker.

I spend the better part of my Friday morning in the zoo’s small animal house with Lonestar, the nine-banded armadillo.

A waiting room is the perfect place to be assaulted by your guilt.

As I wait for Calvin in a booth at Starbucks, I can’t help thinking that there’s a certain poetry in ending this relationship where it began.

 The water tower rises from the ground like a gigantic spider.

 The wedding announcement arrives Tuesday without warning.

 I am stalking my stalker.

That's all for now folks! Now I'm off to check me out some more hookers...

27 comments:

  1. Um, I love these! The first one is awesome, and I really like the Starbucks one, but my favorite is "I am stalking my stalker." bahah. Love! They are definitely intriguing :)

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  2. You do have great hookers! I loved the stalking my stalker.

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  3. So many great Hookers on the blogosphere today. I'd read on! :)

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  4. These are all very strong! I liked the "I am stalking my stalker" line!

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  5. Way to bookend those hookers with the stalker lines! Love it!

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  6. Ditto what Cassie said! Great voice! The waiting room one was fantastic, but they all were ;)

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  7. I'm stalking my stalker??? THAT is awesome.

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  8. Really great hook & voice! Very fun! <3

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  9. Love them all. Perfect last one. Haha. I love it. I love the water tower being compared to a spider and the Starbucks one was pretty great too. Okay, so I like them all. ;0)

    Can't wait for you hangers.

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  10. OOOH! Great hooks. Although the word "spider" officially has me freaked out!

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  11. These are really strong! I think I love the first two the best! And the water tower one. Well done!

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  12. Oh man. 'I am stalking my stalker'. That is great. I really like the third one too.

    And thanks so much for the plug for FFF! :)

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  13. Love these! 3,4, & 6 are especially awesome. :)

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  14. Wow. Wow! These are all phenomenal! I also love, "I am stalking my stalker"! I would definitely keep reading!

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  15. Nice simile with water tower/spider. Love the last stalking my stalker one too. Nice! Can't find a follow button on your blog?? Cheers!

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  16. I love both of the stalker lines, and I can relate to feeling guilt in a waiting room. Great hookers!

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  17. Love them! I'm hooked. Especially by the stalked becoming the stalker!

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  18. Great! I love the synchronicity with the first and last. And great description on the water tower. It sounds like your WIP has a lot going on!

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  19. It is 'stalking my stalker' for me as well, but also loved the rest.

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  20. I love the waiting room line.

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  21. #2 cracked me up. These are fantastic girlie :)

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  22. these are perfect! love them! want to read more!

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  23. okay, oh my goodness, I want to read your book...

    few things are funnier than a random armadillo mention, but #4 is my favourite :)

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  24. Great lines! I love how the first and last lines are linked by stalking :) I too love the armadillo mention.

    Other than those I'd probably choose this one as my favourite for poetic reasons: "The water tower rises from the ground like a gigantic spider."

    I do love that stalking my stalker line though.

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  25. So...when are you going to let me read this elusive work in progress?

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